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Vanndril
>> #11536
Posted on 2014-03-03 11:05:10
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I don't know how much better you've gotten at text placement since this, so I'll just say this, anyway.

Another thing to watch out for is having the font touch or be close to touching the borders of the text space/image. You should avoid that whenever possible. A clear space between the text and any borders increases readability a ton and just plain looks better.

Other than that, this is pretty good.

hwd171
>> #11557
Posted on 2014-03-03 18:07:22
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Vanndril said:
I don't know how much better you've gotten at text placement since this, so I'll just say this, anyway.

Another thing to watch out for is having the font touch or be close to touching the borders of the text space/image. You should avoid that whenever possible. A clear space between the text and any borders increases readability a ton and just plain looks better.

Other than that, this is pretty good.


I know of this now. With my newer works, I avoid that kind of mistake. when I post something new, you'll see the difference.

Vanndril
>> #11647
Posted on 2014-03-05 07:39:19
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hwd171 said:
I know of this now. With my newer works, I avoid that kind of mistake. when I post something new, you'll see the difference.


*nods* Good to hear. :3

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