bimbofication blonde_hair blue_eyes blue_hair breasts brown_hair cani_(apokol) christian-christina_(apokol) comic crown dialogue erect_nipples femdom femsub fishnets genie glasses gloves green_skin groping hair_growth high_heels horns huge_breasts jewelry kaokatt kneeling long_hair magic multicolored_hair opera_gloves original sitting_on_lap text thighhighs transformation transgender yellow_eyes yuri

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kirux
>> #72169
Posted on 2015-09-30 14:07:18
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"Have the brains of a blow up dolll"
"so dumb they can't even live without someone controlling every aspect of their lives"

Redundant text is redundant.

"Give you a new hole to stick that in"
Since I am 99% she wasn't ever letting him fuck her with whatever counts for a penis leaving him "barely a man" I don't she's making him a futa, so she changed her mind about changing him into a girl as well.

There are just so many things wrong with this context. Plus the perspective on the knees and the foot in the second panel is incredibly wonky.

godofwar99
>> #72173
Posted on 2015-09-30 15:16:43
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Looks great

wolfnanaki
>> #72428
Posted on 2015-10-02 08:51:21
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kirux said:
"Have the brains of a blow up dolll"
"so dumb they can't even live without someone controlling every aspect of their lives"

Redundant text is redundant.

She's saying the same thing different ways to reinforce the mindset on her victim. Besides, since she's been made an airhead, she can't really tell the difference.

kirux said:
"Give you a new hole to stick that in"
Since I am 99% she wasn't ever letting him fuck her with whatever counts for a penis leaving him "barely a man" I don't she's making him a futa, so she changed her mind about changing him into a girl as well.

Well what she did was she made him as womanly as possible, but kept his dick, even if she made it tiny and useless. And then, when the bimbo's completely brainwashed, she gets her new hole.

It's silly, and as an English major I'd have chosen different dialog for the middle panel too, but it's just silly feminization fetish smut, so I can forgive it. :V

LordWasp
>> #73797
Posted on 2015-10-15 03:59:13
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I really never thought I'd see writing criticism on bimbo transformation smut, but I guess Hypnohub likes its pr0n well-written.

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