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Trying something a bit different with this one, writing it in first person just for fun.

Thanks to Mr. H for the art and really the idea in general.


I step of the boat and fall to my knees grateful to be on solid ground at long last.

“This place better be as good as you said Jaclyn.” I mutter as I stand up still woozy from the waves.

“Oh it will be, I did plenty of research.” She says with a smile.

I eye her for a moment, it’s a bit hard to read her expressions sometimes. After all they are pretty much the same as my own and since I don’t stare into a mirror all the time I can’t quite tell just how I look in certain moods.

But I don’t think that’s the face I make when I’m plotting something so I’ll just trust her. Not like she can do anything permanent to me.

“Welcome to the Pink Hibiscus.” A light and pretty feminine voice says behind me. Turning I’m greeted by the sight of a very pretty girl with long dark hair, and a lovely tan...that from the looks of it is full body. She wearing nothing but a grass skirt and a few flowers made into jewelry.

“My name is Nikki and I’ll be serving as your guide during your stay here.” She said “I will be happy to get you anything you want.”

I can’t help but raise an eyebrow a little.

“Really now?” I ask as I let my gaze linger on her ample chest for a few moments, her nipples are fully erect and as her skirt sways in the wind I can see a glimpse of her bare pussy.

“Absolutely anything, here at the Pink Hibiscus we serve our customers to the best of our ability all free of charge.”

“See I told you this place was great.” Jacelyn says.

“Yeah it’s pretty perfect but free?” I ask “Seems like it might be a bit...hard to run this place without making a profit.”

Nikki shakes her head “Not at all we have..methods of insuring that we keep everything running without issue.”

I have several questions but really I don’t care enough.

If Jaclyn trust this place I guess I will as well.

“So first things first how about we get you changed into something more comfortable?” Nikki suggest.

“Sure...it’s a bit too warm for my usual outfit.” I say tugging at my gloves they are a bit uncomfortable right now.

“Same.” Jaclyn says “I swear I can already feel my palms sweating through these.” she says clenching her own hand.

Sexy as they are the gloves can be a bit of a pain sometimes.

“Alright, follow me.” Nikki says “We have swimsuits ready for you.”

With that she leads us to a set of changing rooms.

As I step in I hear Jacely making a small comment to Nikki “Funny thing I have a...friend name Nikki...she looks a lot different.” she says to the attendant. There’s little more but I ignore them and close the door.

Once in I strip down letting out a small sigh as I pull my gloves off, the air feels almost cold against the bare skin. After taking everything off I put on the bikini that’s been provided, black and red patches, very nice!

Sliding it on I step out and see Nikki standing there with a smile.

“Your friend went on ahead to the spa.” She explains.

“While that does sound pretty nice...I want to just lay back and read for a bit.” I state “Couldn’t do that on the boat.”

“Whatever you wish.” Niki says “We have several very nice spots by the beach to lounge.” She adds.

I let her show me one of the tents on the beach.

Nicely shaded and close enough to hear the sound of the waves.

“Perfect.” I say stepping in and pulling out my book “Bring me something to drink, make it sweet, cold, and very strong.”

Niki smiles and nods heading off to the bar.

In the meantime I lay back and crack the new book I bought for this occasion. Something about just reading in new places is so enjoyable, that alone is all I really need for a vacation. But if I can be surrounded by sexy naked girls serving me for free all the better.

Though I could just make that happen anytime I felt like it. But not having to set it up is sort of nice.

Before long Nikki brings me my drink, a neon pink cocktail called The Slave Girl.

“Cute name.” I mutter taking a sip. It’s extremely sweet, but not overly so but close. It’s also very, very strong.

It’s so tasty I can’t stop from sucking it down too fast and getting a brain freeze.

Setting it aside and groaning I clutch my head and just lay back.

“Maybe some sun will help counter this.” I grumble dragging my chair out into the light. The warmth of the sun does ease it a bit, but also makes me want more.

Once I’m seated and start up again I realize that I’m stuck in the loop of sipping it so fast that I get that stabbing pain and groaning about it only to repeat it. And before long I drain the glass.

Before I even need to call Nikki is at my side with a new one.

And I drain it just as fast.

The heat and alcohol are starting to get to me .

“Just a little nap should be fine. I’m sure with as attentive as she is Nikki will wake me up before I burn.” I mutter closing my eyes.

“Miss Lomae...I think you’ve had enough sun for today.” I hear Nikki say as she put a soft warm hand on my shoulder.

My eye flutter open, wincing a little at the still too bright light.

Surprisingly I feel fine despite having a lot of alcohol and sun. I’m still pretty tipsy feeling but not as drunk as I would expect.

“Yeah..probably.” I say slowly sitting up my head spinning a little.

“How long was I asleep?” I ask stretching a bit.

“Just long enough to get a very nice tan.” Nikki says with a giggle.

“A..tan?” I ask looking down and indeed my skin has darkened to nice deep brown tan. “That was..fast.” is all I can say.

“So you said something about a spa earlier?” I ask rolling my neck, while the chair was comfortable it wasn’t the best to sleep on.

“Ah yes, you want to go?” Nikki ask.

“Yeah.” I respond “Sounds great.”

With that once more Nikki leads the way.

“So where’s Jaclyn?” I ask just wondering what she’s up to now.

“She’s at the buffet last I saw.” Nikki answers.

I nod thinking about just how good that sounds after the spa trip but this first.

Once we arrive I’m told to strip, so I do.

“We’ll start of with a massage.” Nikki says as we walk into a room with a massage table. I lay down and wait.

“I’m just going to put on some music.” Nikki says. And just a few seconds later some light, relaxing tropical music fills the room. Though I can’t help but notice some kind of static in the background of it.

Just faint enough to barely hear it. I think about saying something but it’s just low enough that I can pretty much ignore it, though it’s still there.

Nikki starts rubbing my shoulders and neck. She’s wonderful skilled at it and the massage oil she’s using is so warm and has a nice lavender scent.

I just let go of all my thoughts and relax enjoying the feeling of her hands all along my body. And the music, I’m actually trying to find the static.

I can’t quite pin it down, just enough to hardly notice it. Like everytime I think I have fully tuned I hear a sudden burst of it again and it’s sort of annoying but intriguing.

I almost feel like there’s words in the static but I can’t make them out and the harder I try the harder it becomes to pick them out.

“Alright I think you are good.” Nikki says almost snapping me out of my static induced haze. “After all a two hour massage is pretty long.”

“Two hours?” I mummer trying to lift up only to realize that I’m far too relaxed to support myself.

“Don’t bother standing up.” Nikki says helping me to lay down on my back. “We can just adjust the table.”

As she says that she works some levers under the table and it soon shifts into a chair lifting me up a little bit.

“Now the next little step is a makeover.” Nikki says “I have just the colors in mind...so just relax.” She adds softly.

“No problem.” I tell her closing my eyes and just letting her start her job. I can feel her working on my toenails and moving up to my fingernails. All the while I just keep focusing on the static in the music.

I can actually make out some words...something about...service…

It’s hard not to drift off a bit. In my hazy half asleep state that static is a lot clearer. Just a simple loop reminding me how good it is to work here, about how happy I am to service the customers.

For some reason I can’t help but think that seems...odd...but accurate. When I try to think of why it’s strange the static gets louder and slightly unpleasant . Just enough to make me not want to dwell on it.

So I don’t after all it’s way easier to just relax and listen to it while it’s low and soft like this.

“All done.” Nikki says “You look great.” she says holding up a mirror, looking into it I can’t help but smile. I look so good, the usual black and red of my lipstick has been replace with bright pink and yellow. It looks great with my tan.

“You are almost ready to get to work.” Nikki says winking “Just need a proper uniform.”

I look down and frown I’m wearing a bright red bikini which while good looking is hardly fitting for an employe.

Nikki removes her own skirt and offers it to me.

“I’ll get a new one you change and go tend to our new client.” Nikki says.

“Alright.” I says stripping down myself and slipping the skirt on. Looking down I half frown.

I have some pretty noticeable tan lines, though they’ll go away soon enough but until then I’ll have some pretty pale breasts...though it’s kind of a good look.

As Nikki leaves to get a replacement skirt I head out to the beach.

I spot Jaclyn leaning back in a chair completely nude holding a drink and smiling at me.

“Hey...looking good.” She says eyeing me up.

“Thank you.” I answer with a small giggle.

“So first things first, I need a bit more sunblock.” She says holding up a bottle get started, I’ve already gotten a bit pink.” She says pointing at her belly that has indeed turned a light shade of pink.

“Right away.” I answer with a smile and take a bottle of lotion rest next to her and start rubbing her down.

Posted on 2018-01-27 15:36:40
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Man no one is safe from this resort huh? Not that I'm complaining or anything.

Posted on 2018-01-27 15:45:43
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Yeah it's worth it though. Lots of fun there.

Just be careful with the slave girls. I mean the drinks as well as the employees.

Posted on 2018-01-27 16:33:45
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Just wait til they start paying for ad space here on the Hub.

Posted on 2018-01-27 16:36:22
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No pop ups though cause those are getting phased out but a banner ad could actually be a cool pic to see sometime.

Posted on 2018-01-27 17:12:04
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Always love first person perspective in stories. Very nice, Imasuky!

Posted on 2018-01-27 17:16:55
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Thanks. It was a lot of fun, I do like writing in first person but haven't done it in a while. This was a good way to get back into it.

Posted on 2018-01-27 17:35:36
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Hehe as an albino the last thing I would be doing is sun bathing XD

Atleasti have imasuky to put sunblock on me <3

Posted on 2018-01-27 17:36:20
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Good thing it's sunset then.

Posted on 2018-01-27 18:25:21
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Who goes sunbathing during a sunset?