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  • Id: 40581
  • Posted: 2016-09-30 03:16:08
    by SilentFive
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  • Rating: Questionable
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SilentFive
>> #128601
Posted on 2016-09-30 03:17:03
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So, working off of the advice from yesterday, here is Cybris, once more. Damn, do I love cyborgs. They're so fun to draw.
RedCollarBlackCollar
>> #128606
Posted on 2016-09-30 03:34:33
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It's coming along much better, I do appreciate the effort. A few more pointers this time around:
>The breasts, while certainly exaggerated, look like separate objects from the body the way they're positioned. Consider reducing em in size a bit, as to try to have em look somewhat more "natural" as again, opposed to being separate objects.
>(Her) left arm seems kinda awkward the way it's not hanging like her other arm. It's just kinda out there...
>Face could be a bit rounder, as it's currently kinda angular and more "sharp" in a way.
>Last thing's totally personal preference, but do consider experimenting with hair styles if possible. I think you can pull off something a bit more interesting, yet still in the very same vein as what you got going on currently in terms of spiked colorful hair. If/when you get around to drafting some different styles, post it to this forum through an outside link: hypnohub.net/forum/show/34379
At the very least I (and hopefully others) can give some feedback.

Anyway you're coming along slowly but surely. Keep it up :P
SilentFive
>> #128607
Posted on 2016-09-30 03:42:31
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RedCollarBlackCollar said:
It's coming along much better, I do appreciate the effort. A few more pointers this time around:
>The breasts, while certainly exaggerated, look like separate objects from the body the way they're positioned. Consider reducing em in size a bit, as to try to have em look somewhat more "natural" as again, opposed to being separate objects.
>(Her) left arm seems kinda awkward the way it's not hanging like her other arm. It's just kinda out there...
>Face could be a bit rounder, as it's currently kinda angular and more "sharp" in a way.
>Last thing's totally personal preference, but do consider experimenting with hair styles if possible. I think you can pull off something a bit more interesting, yet still in the very same vein as what you got going on currently in terms of spiked colorful hair. If/when you get around to drafting some different styles, post it to this forum through an outside link: hypnohub.net/forum/show/34379
At the very least I (and hopefully others) can give some feedback.

Anyway you're coming along slowly but surely. Keep it up :P


Thanks.
someguy231
>> #128621
Posted on 2016-09-30 05:19:20
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SilentFive said:
So, working off of the advice from yesterday, here is Cybris, once more. Damn, do I love cyborgs. They're so fun to draw.


Yes, Cyborgs are awesome!
LBAz
>> #128671
Posted on 2016-09-30 09:25:09
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While daily practice is great and all, maybe you should consider improving your skills a bit more and studying more on drawing basics before posting more stuff.

I mean, it could be worse, but it isn't exactly pleasant on the eyes either.
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